I really love the changes you made. The meaning didn't change and the words are elegant and eloquent. Thank you.

I've always been uncertain of my writing, but I think with the changes my editor made, I'll have a better chance getting into my top choice. I was very confused about what admissions officers are looking for in the essay, so it was nice to have an editor who knew what to include and what to take out. He helped me emphasize the stronger parts of my essay and remove the cliched parts.

Thanks so much for your guidance during the MBA application process! With your help, I felt much more comfortable and at ease throughout.