Thank you very much for your editing. I especially appreciated your comments and critique. Your editing made my essay much more succinct and clear, and your critique helped me learn the weaknesses of my writing, which will help me in the future.

I really love the changes you made. The meaning didn't change and the words are elegant and eloquent. Thank you.

Before, I was worried that my essay was something I would regret as the biggest weakness in my application. Now I feel like it's one of my greatest strengths.