I wasn't sure if my essay really needed another edit, but when I saw the changes my editor made, I was so happy I had decided to try it out!
Brilliant job. You really took the junk that I wrote and polished it into a piece of gold! Thank you so much.
Before, I was worried that my essay was something I would regret as the biggest weakness in my application. Now I feel like it's one of my greatest strengths.